Today we worked on revising our Causes of WWII paragraphs so that they are thorough, specific, and smart.
We looked at an example that needed revision and didn't quite have a complete discussion.
Hop to this site and retrieve the TIED Paragraph Revision worksheets. Highlight each of the elements of a TIED paragraph in different colors. What's missing? What needs more attention?
Check out the revisions I made for the example paragraph using the TIED Paragraph Organizer.
Using the Organizer, rewrite and revise your Causes of WWII paragraph. GO!
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