Tuesday, June 14: Last Day of Classes! Portfolio Prep! Advisory trips!
*******SUPER IMPORTANT!!!*************** For the FINAL EXAM, you may use ALL - yes, all - of your notes from this year. In fact, YOU REALLY NEED to use all your notes for the final exam. MAKE SURE YOU FIND ALL YOUR NOTES and have them in your humanities folder to bring to the exam. They MUST be in your HUMANITIES FOLDER in order for you to use them on the Final Exam!
Today we worked on revising our Causes of WWII paragraphs so that they are thorough, specific, and smart.
We looked at an example that needed revision and didn't quite have a complete discussion.
Hop to this site and retrieve the TIED Paragraph Revision worksheets. Highlight each of the elements of a TIED paragraph in different colors. What's missing? What needs more attention?
Check out the revisions I made for the example paragraph using the TIED Paragraph Organizer.
Using the Organizer, rewrite and revise your Causes of WWII paragraph. GO!
*very slight, gradual, or subtle *not perceptible; not perceived by or noted by the senses *when you do not notice something
"Terror was stronger than hunger. Suddenly, we saw the door of Block 37 open imperceptibly. A man appeared, crawling like a work in the direction of the cauldrons" (Wiesel, 56).
Picture of the entrance (for prisoners) to Auschwitz-Birkenau
A little tip from your Local Humanities Teacher . . .
As you start PREWRITING & BRAINSTORMING & DRAFTING your Historical Setting essays, remember the following:
You are graded on your PROCESS of writing, NOT only the final draft. You could fail the essay even if you hand in a stellar final draft but do not show any of your process work.
Record all yourprewriting, brainstorming, freewriting, thesis drafts, evidenceyou want to use,reading notes (even on post-its)
Keep every draft of your essay separate! even if you type them, make sure you hand inALL the different drafts you write.
If you need to use the drafting organizers I have in the room, USE THEM! You will have a better essay & a better grade.